Belief 00072 needs better wording

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ArlissWhiteside
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Belief 00072 needs better wording

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Belief 00072: Human primary significant other relationships are extremely difficult to maintain optimally, and can easily deteriorate due to the build-up of chronic anger, causing much PSDED through conflictual interaction and through chronic stress, and this PSDED can extend to others close to them within their spheres of influence, especially any cared-for children.

I think the wording of this belief needs to be improved for easier understanding. I suggest it be rewritten as:

Human relationships with significant others are extremely difficult to maintain. These relationships can easily deteriorate due to the build-up of chronic anger, causing much PSDED. This PSDED will affect to others close to them, especially any children.

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Re: Belief 00072 needs better wording

Post by wvanfleet »

I agree, and changed the wording to:

[Human relationships with significant others are extremely difficult to maintain. These relationships can easily deteriorate due to the build-up of chronic anger, causing much PSDED. This PSDED will tend to extend to others close to them, especially any children.]

I also attached the definition of "PSDED."

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